Monday, March 3, 2014

The Three Wolves


The three wolves were moving out sad, but probably very relieved to finally get away from the old grinch AKA mum. Now a problem occured, where to live and what to use to build the house. They will need a big house for a growing family. So they set of to gather supplies. John stole some hay from a local farmer, meanwhile Bob took some sticks from the nearby campfire and the smartest brother, Joe went to the closest hardware store and bought some bricks, tools and cement. Then all three of them started to build their houses. Guess what house lasted the longest once storm Katrina hit? 
THE END

By Samuel
 

8 comments:

  1. its really funny like the story.

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  2. This is a really nice story Samuel. Please read my story at:
    http://wilbo168.primaryblogger.co.uk/danas-blog-space/100wc-week24-by-dana

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  3. very good Samuel I really liked the "tree little wolves" really smart to use sarcasm at the end

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  4. Haha i like the ending........ im guessing that joes house lasted the longest.
    Emily BIS New Zealand

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  5. loved the twist and humour in the story and im also guessing that Joes house lasted the longest :) :) :)

    sarah.c bis NZ

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  6. This is a super story from start to finish and very wittily told..Loved the fact it was their Mum they were escaping and it was a dramatic and unexpected finish. One tint point - you lapsed into the present tense when you mentioned the kind of house they;d need when the rest was in the past.

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  7. awesome writing sam



    from luke rm11

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