Monday, March 10, 2014

The job

Robin loved eating anything sweet .One day she went to the supermarket. As she walked round the shop the manager came out and randomly offered her a job, she was shocked but still took the job. one day she went and took a box of biscuits and ate them, this became a habit and the boss soon realised that biscuits going missing , she spied on her employees, she caught Robin!! The next day Robin went to get another biscuit but when she lifted the lid there was nothing inside but a bomb! BOOM


By Emily

3 comments:

  1. Nice Story Emily :)

    Olivia P

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  2. cool story BOOM!!!!!!! very wacky


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  3. I may never open a box of biscuits again! Great idea, Emily and you've managed to fit a lot of story into 100 words. Well done! Be careful to check over your punctuation before you post next time and it will be even better!

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