Thursday, March 20, 2014

Eve's adventure

Once upon a time there was a baby girl named Eve, she was born on Christmas Eve too! When she went to school for her first time, Eve slowly entered the year 1(5 year olds) classroom in fear, her tummy feet like there were happy little butterflies fluttering inside, then evil butterflies took over! She heard a friendly voice calmly saying “hello there” so Eve quickly pivoted her head to the mysterious noise, IT WAS THE TEACHER!!The teacher whispered to Eve “look up! Can you see?” Eve replied back “yes the pictures are amazing” she happily walked off
until she….                 

By Meg(:

2 comments:

  1. Hi Meg,
    Thank you for entering this week's 100 Word Challenge.
    I enjoyed reading your story.
    You did a great job describing Eve's first day in school. Well done!
    The first day of school has to be the most traumatic day in the lives of most children.
    I'm wondering what happened when she walked off happily?
    Keep up the good work.

    Mary @ Team 100 WC

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  2. What happen's next Meg? TELL MEEEE!!!!!!!!!
    -Natalie

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