She
said to her self “should I do it” she did and started to walk towards the front
door. Her hart is pumping faster than the speed of sound. She opened the door
and stepped inside, as she put her foot down on the loose floor boards there
was a loud crack, witch made her jump like a horse trying to run away form a lion. She
kept on walking towards what looked like a kitchen so she went that way. She
walked into the half open door and suddenly heard a quite screaming nose. She
sore a box on the bench and when she lifted the lid…
By Isaac
I like how mysterious the start is and that you don't say where she is!Good job Isaac
ReplyDeleteEmily