Once upon a time a young girl and boy were walking through a forest which they got lost in. They were running around trying to find a house or their home, they searched and searched until they found a ginger bread house, they looked in side in and found a nice pair of twins and asked them for help they reply "sure" and then they lived happily ever after with the twins. Until one day there mother came and thought they were useless, so she just drove them back into the forest with no directions!
From Sarah
Wednesday, March 5, 2014
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Well done on your entry Sarah. I thought the story had ended and you came up with another twist to keep the reader interested. Next time it may be worth reading the story out loud at the end to see if you have missed any punctuation.
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