By Baydn.
Thursday, March 20, 2014
The big crash
One day there was a boy with his pet dog and they where walking down the street. Look up can you see that plane said the boy the dog looked at the boy in confusion as he did not understand the boy. All of a sudden the plane sped strait down to the ground and it got closer to the ground. It made a big sound as it hit the ground and there was stuff every where. They got to the plane and got a phone he rang 111 asked for every thing.93 they all came to help unfortunately 5 people died.
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Hi Baydn it Adam her i like the way you used unfortunately because it is a long word yea
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You did a nice job working the prompt into an interesting story line, Baydn. Even though it didn't have a happy ending, it was very realistic. Make sure you remember to edit, so misspellings and incorrect punctuation do not take away from your interesting and entertaining entry.
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