Wednesday, March 12, 2014

The dogs tale

Emma was on her way home from school, she saw a mystery box on the side of the road, Should she open it or should she leave it alone? Emma decided to open it,because she expected some cake inside, but when she lifted the lid and saw the cutest dog in the world, she was very surprised.Emma ran off with the dog, up the street and all the way home. When Emma got home she was very tired and took her new dog straight to her room to play.As soon as the dog got out of the box it weed all over the floor and like all dogs he was very hungry. By now the real owner was very worried where had her birthday present gone?

By Samuel

3 comments:

  1. great!!!!!! story sam I like what words you used


    from Hamish

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  2. Yum cake! You made me hungry Nice work

    By Olivia P

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  3. Samuel, I enjoyed your post, all very surreal! When typing, remember to put a space after the full stop before the capital letter, as I'm sure you'd do that in writing by hand. Keep it up!

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