As she
opened the creaky old door she heard a knocking sound from coming from the
narrow stiff staircase. She went down with caution she found a solid gold chest
right in the middle of the small room. She sighed and realized the strange knocking
sound was her heart beating like a drum. She imagined all the gold that could
be in there but when she opened the lid she found a little girl, she screamed
as the dead girl was her. She turned around to find blood trickling from the
staircase. She awoke to find she was just dreaming.
By Hamish
Well done hamish
ReplyDeleteby baydn
why nice work hamish it was a bit scary but it is good.
ReplyDeleteby ur people baydn
Wow that was creepy but how can she see her self dead
ReplyDeleteby isaac
Scary! I like how you put 'The strange knocking sound was her heart beating like a drum'
ReplyDeleteBy Olivia P