Friday, September 20, 2013

5 sentence challenge



The animal are happy.some animals has children.The man in the tractor is thinking.The sheep are
running. The pigs and dog is in the mud.

By Rahul



The dog on the farm ran right to the door, past all of the giant animals of horses, ducks and cows. The gate was in sight but he slipped, crashed into the watery mud and the farmer said you’re muddy again.

By Karl 


A farmer drives his tractor to the garden so he could go and harvest crops for he had harvested corn, rice, wheat, tobacco and reed so he could make bread, risotto, paper, tobacco and corn but it was really hard work.

By Hadlee


All the big animals are having babys.

The farmer said look the baby cat don’st know were its mother is . 

The baby cat looked and looked until she saw the cow family have you see my mother.

yes she is over at the hens so she went to the hen house have you seen my mother.

Yes she is there hi mum.

By Vinnie

The storm

As I walk home from school It begins to rain, ahh! Im going to get soaked I think to my self! About 10 minuites later I hear thunder, I look up and then I saw a bright light …. That’s not thunder? A big spaceship levitates over me. I start to run but get lifted off my feet by something. Just like in the movies I say!? Im in a room that’s pitch black then I fall into deep sleep after something pinches me. Im in my bed, at my house,  in my pajamas? I must have been dreaming, but then I saw a bright light outside oh no!.

By Asia

Lights out


The last thing I can remember was cashing out money from the bank, I can’t remember exactly how much but once I got my money, it was lights out. So here I am, sitting on a chair seems fine and that’s what you’d think but the twist was I was tied up. As soon as I woke up a stick hit my head but this time it wasn’t a black out it was white and I couldn’t wake up. I felt a slight pinch on my nose as I now couldn’t breathe properly there was no chance of survival.
By Jewel

The dream...


I’M DREAMING, IT’S WEIRD, I DREAM ALOT, EVERY NIGHT, BUT NEVER ABOUT SOMETHING LIKE THIS. I’M DREAMING ABOUT A BRIGHT LIGHT IN MY WARDROBE FLASHING CONTINUOUSLY AT ME, IT WONT STOP. THE FLASHING IS LIKE A RAINBOW, CHANGING FROM RED-ORANGE-YELLOW-GREEN-BLUE AND PURPLE. 
I WAKE IN FRIGHT FORM THE FLASHING, AS I REACH TO TURN THE LIGHT ON I LOOK ACROSS THE ROOM. IT’S COMING FROM MY WARDROBE, THE RAINBOW FLASHING. I GET UP AND MOVE CLOSER, I REACH FOR THE HANDLE AND PULL IT OPEN, THE LIGHTS SWALLOW ME UP, THEN I’M GONE.

BY BRYLEE 

Suddenly, I saw the light

I opened my eyes, and there was an acheing pain im my mouth. My vision was blurred so i could not see much but the shining light above my head. But then all of a sudden the light was taken away, and moments later a woman in a white coat stood beside me."I took out two teeth and put in a filling," she said."She is not going to remember much but it will wear off in about an hour". My eyes felt heavy and i couldnt hear much, but a few moments later i drifted off to sleep.
By
Emma

Boom!


I was sitting in my room doing my homework like any other day, but today wasn't like any other day, but of course I didn't know that until, BOOM, a big bright light flickered on and off in a second. For a start I thought I might have been seeing things, but then it went off again, I was starting to get scared. But I continued to do my homework. Then unexpectedly it went off again. Now I was really scared, so I ran out to mum and told her about the light, but no surprise she didn't believe me. Then, BOOM. But this time it wasn't the light... 

By Nikita

The deadly light


One day I was walking home from school then all of a sudden everything went black. I woke up with no memory of the previous day and what I did appalled at my state of mind. I walked out of my room. Once I opened the door a flashing light shone in the hallway, unaware of my surroundings, I dashed for the nearest exit and tried to open the front door - locked!. I sprinted as fast as I could to the back door it was also locked! I looked behind me, the light came closer and closer then..... nothing was remaining of my life.

Xander 

Walking home from school


As I walk home from school It begins to rain, ahh! Im going to get soaked I think to my self! About 10 minuites later I hear thunder, I look up and then I saw a bright light …. That’s not thunder? A big spaceship levitates over me. I start to run but get lifted off my feet by something. Just like in the movies I say!? Im in a room that’s pitch black then I fall into deep sleep after something pinches me. Im in my bed, at my house,  in my pajamas? I must have been dreaming, but then I saw a bright light outside oh no!.

By Asia

The barking light

Running past the trees, wind blowing my hair and soft grass underneath, I headed for the tunnel under the thunder path.  Passing the pond, there's no time for ducks. A two leg sped by. I stopped, waiting for a gap between the monsters with shiny pelts.  I bolt across to the other side.  Home in sight, I speed to the open door, breathless, galloping down the hallway like a horse.  On the bed I go.  I hear a scream and hide, peeking out I saw a bright light shining in my eyes.  I was welcomed with cuddles and waved my tail like a flag blowing in the wind. I'm home.

By Hannah

UFO Scare


Its 9:00pm, I'm on my way home but take a shortcut through the cemetery.  As I'm walking I trip over a grave, my knee starts to bleed, I sit on a bench and try to stop the bleeding and then I saw a bright light.  I look up and see a strange circle hovering towards me, I soon see that it is a UFO I freeze in
terror.  It lands on the ground I'm terrified and start to run, but I'm not fast enough.  I'm sucked up into the UFO.  I start to cry for help but no one can hear me or save me from leaving the planet.  Goodbye earth!

By Portia

...and then


I woke up at 3 o’clock in the morning half asleep when I saw it. It was bright blue with shining red lights. As I walked towards it started to get brighter and brighter until I could barely see. And then I saw it the most amazing thing I ever saw. It was gigantic, scary but fantastic all at the same time. I didn’t know whether to smile or wet my pants. It was a UFO in my backyard. Then I heard my mum come. I told her what had happened and she said I’m imaging things. Maybe not to much sugar tomorrow 

From Tom          

Bright light


In the dark cold night there was a killer on the loose. I was with myself at the time I heard a gun shot and yes that was him. They called him the devil that sleep at day and roamed the night time.

As I was running I heard  mans voice saying I will get you I will kill you. And then I saw a bright light but it was no ordinary light. I see a ufo looking thing. The ufo looking thing sped over the devil and stopped, then they sucked him up. At the time I was running and looking back he scarred me for life!

By Levi

The darkness


It was dark, the only light i could see was the brightness coming from the magnificent moon with its rays beaming in my room otherwise it was pitch black.

It was so dark that I hid under my covers just to keep safe but it didn’t help at all.  All it did was bring more darkness into my life.

I started to think bad thoughts that I never thought possible, my mind was going blank, I needed help.

The only help I could find was “MUM!” I screamed.....and then I saw the bright light

By Tehya

The Spaceship


Then saw a bright light this bright light would always be in my memory the day I made a spaceship and flew to space this was when I saw aliens they didn’t look much different to me but they had tails they said it was evolution so i went with them to there home planet luna690 just like earth but with no dogs so the bright light it wasn’t aliens no space ship all it was, was my mother telling me to go to bed the bright light all it was was my torch 

By Sabian

The bright light


I’ve  been stranded for days no food or water my lips are as dry as lizards skin. I’m all skin and bone no  what so ever. My friends are already dead they died from starvation and dehydration. I’ve been seeing  food people and hotels and then I find a cave. I saw a bright light at the end of it i start walking I realize it  disappears in the distance. I cant hold myself up any more I collapse  I can hear the sound of water trickling but I cant see it anywhere. Will I ever get out alive?

By Rose

Imagine


Suddenly i saw a bright light flicker into my hands. I looked down to see a small yellow fairy sitting in the palm of my hands. The fairy looked up at me, and its soft eyes sparkled in mine. It quickly fluttered off my hand and dashed around my room, searching for a way out. I sat examining it, I couldn’t believe it was real. I rubbed the sleep out of my eyes yet the fairy still remained in my room. I opened my icy window and let the fairy out. As it flew off into the distance my thoughts raced through my mind. Could this be real? 

by Isabella

Wednesday, September 18, 2013

The wolf


Darkness began to descend....... Damp mist filled the air causing my body to shiver uncontrollably. I wrapped my arms around myself trying to warm myself up. I had been walking for a long time and was hopelessly lost with no one to help me! I heard a wolf howling and a loud growl told me the wolf was planning his dinner. I was the main course, I started to run stumbling on branches tripping up. And then I saw a bright light.... Making it difficult to see anything!! I heard my dad yelling. I felt relieved help was coming, I was no longer alone.

Lilly

The sleepwalk disaster


Late last night I staggered to my bed after watching a movie, I climbed under my covers and slowly drifted off to sleep. Several hours later I wake up with a bright light shining into my eyes; ‘ah’ I moan ‘what are you doing, what happened to me’, that’s when the doctor explained what happened ‘well, after you fell asleep, you started sleep walking and swinging your arms around like you were sword fighting, you then tripped down the stairs, fell through a window and then you fell into the swimming pool, and you were lucky to survive.

By Jessica 

Spotlight


I saw a bright light in front of me, I wondered what it was. I was trying to figure it out in my head why I was trying to picture what this weird thing was, when out of no-where came the ninja turtles. They were playing spotlight with their arch enemy the KRANG. I asked if I could play, Leonardo the leader of the turtles said I could, I was happy. We played down in the stinky sewer all day. Once we had finished playing spotlight we all went home and had a cup of milo.

By Angus

Tuesday, September 17, 2013

My near death experience


As the train flew off the rails and into the ditch, we were all lifted from our seats and hurled across the carriage as it hit a tree. Panic ripped through me and then I saw a bright light. I thought I was going to die. I was unconscious for a while then, when I opened my eyes the light started to fade away and I thought to myself. 'Am I in heaven?' Then I saw that I was on the blood stained grass in front of the train. When my life flashed before my eyes I truly thought I was going to die.

By Amber

And then...


I woke up at 3 o’clock in the morning half asleep when I saw it. It was bright blue with shining red lights. As I walked towards it started to get brighter and brighter until I could barely see. And then I saw it the most amazing thing I ever saw. It was gigantic, scary but fantastic all at the same time. I didn’t know whether to smile or wet my pants. It was a UFO in my backyard. Then I heard my mum come. I told her what had happened and she said I’m imaging things. Maybe not to much sugar tomorrow 

From Tom