Monday, March 10, 2014

The strange box

Once there was a girl walking through the woods, when she walked into a big box. She wondered what was inside it. She thought there would be something like a puppy in it. But when she opened the lid! There was a massive killer colossal squid in it. She let out a big SCREAM and started to run. But the massive squid reached out and grabbed the girl by the waist and pulled her towards him. The squid put her in his mouth and ate her. The next day her parents started looking for her until they saw the massive killer colossal squid.
                                      
The end

By Zane

3 comments:

  1. did the parents get eaten

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  2. i love the way u used the scream Zane

    by Isaac

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  3. I like the squid but i want to know if it is big or not.

    by baydn :)

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