One day a little girl was getting ready for school, but when she went to pick up her lunch from the table a little mysterious box popped up. The girl got such a fright that she jumped then grabbed her lunch then left. While the girl was walking to school she told her friends about the box but they didn't believe her, they just said "you have an amazing imagination!" When the girl got home she got the box and she expected there to be a little teddy inside but when she opened the box there was a mini dinosaur.
By Olivia P
funny, was the dinosar real
ReplyDeleteGreat story Olivia,good punctuation I like how imaginative you were,
ReplyDeleteEmily.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteThank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge this week. You've created an interesting piece of writing using the prompt and have written your ideas in punctuated sentences.
Well done!
Mrs Stones - Bradford, U.K.
http://bradfordschools.net/blog/miriamlord100wc/
You have a clever imagination. The dinosaur was a surprise, but dinosaurs can be fun too. Well done, keep writing!
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your contribution to the 100 word challenge this week. You have written a lovely story with plenty of suspense and a surprise twist at the end. I wonder what happened next and what the girl did with her new pet dinosaur? Keep writing and using your imagination!