Thursday, March 20, 2014

Amelia

Once upon a time there was you young girl who was called Amelia she was a slave for a rich family. She was taken from Africa and her family when she was four. She had so much work to do every day that she was lucky to get any sleep! She had to do all the cooking all the dishes the laundry all the house work the gardens and even clean the pool.One day she saw something falling from the sky. It was a plane and it was stuffed with money. she shouted out  "look up ! can you see that?  and then realised no one was there. then flew home and was rich with her family and lived happily ever after.


By RYAN

2 comments:

  1. I'm so glad you wrote that the character could go home to her family. How awful a situation she was in! Your story was interesting and you made a very creative use of the prompt. Good work, keep writing!

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  2. Ooops! Sorry Ryan, got a little confused with your title and name!

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