This is a story of a girl who had cancer she didn’t like having it. But this girl was brave she did sports,games just for fun she loved it most of all football she loved it the most. The day had come to go back to the hospital have an x-ray to see were it has gone it had gone to her stomach. She was scared,but she went on with school work and everything else.One night she snuck out and went on top of a hill she looked up can u see said someone it was god she was finally cured from her sickness she fainted.
By Heath
This is a very powerful 100wc, I really like it. You describe a lot of difference emotions... I'm glad the girl had fun with sports, and I can understand the hospital trip would be scary. Read over your story before you post it, I think that will help you continue to improve.
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