Wednesday, March 5, 2014

5 Sentence Challenge - The Storm

The Storm 

A magnificent  electrical storm passed through Nelson yesterday. It was a bright purple colour. When the lightning struck an upside down tree with it branches. People were frighted of the storm because of the children the people was angry. 

By Olivia



3 comments:

  1. Nice story Olivia, I like the words you used :)

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  2. amazing story and very decriptive

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  3. Mrs Skinner (Team100) Bristol, UKMarch 8, 2014 at 4:07 AM

    This challenge is for young writers who are just beginning their writing journey not for someone as talented as you Olivia. I do hope we will see your work on 100WC instead!

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