If I were in charge of the world I would invent a device which would allow people to see things from my point of view. I would build a wall around New Zealand to keep out all the meddling Donald Trumps. I would make sure that all the people of the world lived in a democratic society where everyone is valued equally. I would probably waste a whole lot of time worrying whether or not I was a good leader. I would make sure everyone was paid enough money to support their families. I would make sure everyone was allowed their right to an education. That is something I would value above all else. I would start the international kindness committee devoted to bringing an end to bullying. I would give hugs instead of handshakes . I would make all the politicians wear fluorescent pink ties. And every election I would make all politicians wear lie detectors. I would make law against the words no offence, just because you say it doesn't make a difference. I would destroy cars and have everyone travel on tricycles. I would always try to be honest and honestly I can promise to do a least some of the things on this list.
By Zoe
I loved your story. it made me laugh it was also a good length to..... but next time make sure you use better descriptive words.
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I loved this story. I love the way you have'nt rushed this outstanding story. I would rate this 10 out of ten. Great descriptive words.
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