How To Survive An Outbreak Of Dinosaurs In Nelson
There is an outbreak of dinosaurs in Nelson and no one knows what to do except me… If you want to know how to survive, read on.
There is an outbreak of dinosaurs in Nelson and no one knows what to do except me… If you want to know how to survive, read on.
Dinosaurs have been in Nelson for centuries and we have grown to love them. They will have their good days and their bad days but on their bad days you're gonna need to know to survive and no one knows when it is going to be a bad day so you need to be prepared at all times.
Weapons- weapons such as guns and knives will come in handy when the dinosaurs are having a bad day and it becomes a matter of life or death. These can be used for all dinosaurs and need to be carried with you at all times.
Something shiny- you will need this for distracting certain dinosaurs, and only certain ones such as Anatotitan and Seismosaurus (and much more). This will help when you are near getting attacked.
Anatotitan Seismosaurus
Mini meteorite rocks- these come in small glass jars and are only to be used in the BIGGEST emergencies. You will also need fireproof gloves to grab the burning meteorites to throw (a slingshot comes with this too).
Now that you know how to survive, there is one last thing you are going to need, to be cautious- if you’re not cautious you will be devoured in less than a second!
So spread the news, and teach everyone how to survive the outbreak of dinosaurs.
By Amber T
Amber, I love your story and how you described everything well. N.S. Use Vocabulary associated with time (then,there,when) from charlotte
ReplyDeleteyou used your paragraphs well. Your information was also sequenced well to show cause and effect.you could work on using your nouns and verbs.
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Good job! I really enjoyed reading this. Next time try to use more verbs. - Sophia
ReplyDeleteI really like your story I like the bit at the start that says if you want to know how to survive then read on. By Sophie
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