Wednesday, October 19, 2016

Week 2- Jake

With the advance in science cloning May become a thing however there may be some errors and we may find are self attacked by dinosaur so this explanation is about
How to survive the most stupid and unnecessary dinosaur attack

The first thing you DON'T want to do is enter forest or any other areas that may give the creatures a upper hand especially when it comes to velociraptors unless you give up of course and your goal is to die but still do not enter these areas and NEVER use a raft to escape the onslaught you'll ether com back to the onslaught OR be trapped on an island in the middle of nowhere

The next thing you should take note of is the resources you're left with ESPECIALLY food the less food the more hunting and if there's no food then it's kill or be killed and in this scenario there is no going back.the other thing you need to take note on is water this is a must have for survival but there's no way you are just going to simply just drink water from the sea

The last thing is the main base with these creatures you need a base that is not
.out in the open
.easy to enter
and left undefended
The reason you would have this is so you can store food sleep at night and is a safe last resort

In conclusion this would never happen but if it does happen then you would know what to do

By jake

7 comments:

  1. cool explanation Jake next time though check your spelling. Matt

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  2. cool explanation Jake next time though check your spelling. Matt

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  3. I really like your story! You gave a general statement that gave background information about the topic you had really good ideas that would help if dinosaurs did attack. Next time check through your work more carefully to check for any mistakes.

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  4. Hi Jake,
    You used vocabulary associated with time
    You used paragraphs in good places
    I can't find anything that you have done "wrong" and you have done everything correctly, good job!
    ~Amber T

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  5. you used a closing statement and a opening statment
    you needed ato use logically seaquanced paeaagraphs

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  6. Interesting story Jake
    You had good paragraphs and a conclusion.
    Next time use an opening statement
    -Danny

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  7. Hi Jake. I like your story, It reminds me of a video game I know. I like how you said the less food the more hunting and if there's no food then it's kill or be killed -Noah

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