“Raaaah” I run into a wall trying to escape a utahraptor. I jump into a 3 ft well and hide in a little hole. 2 hours later the utahraptor loses interest in his tea. At that moment i knew i stuffed up because there is no way i see to get out out of the well but i barely see a camouflaged ladder so i start to climb up .i am out of the wall now “ruuuuun” i bolt to the supermarket to get some food because i am starving so the doors are jammed so i grab a triceratops horn and i use it to smash the glass on the door so i slip through. I grab enough food to last me about 4 days i find a random car just sitting on the side of the rode so i start to hotwire it so there is a smaller chance of being attacked by a dinosaur. I finally arrive at my dinosaur smashed house it is wrecked the walls are broken,the roof is asswell and the door is even knocked down as well. I slowly mumble to my safe “click” the safe opened i grab my spaz 12 for protection.
By Connor
Next time you should have followed the assessment sheet, but I liked your technical terms and your nouns and verbs.
ReplyDelete~Ryan B
nice spaz 12 you got also good job on present tense and technical language:brandon aka burger king
ReplyDeleteTo Conner
ReplyDeleteI love your story and it is really funny. I love the words that you used! Keep up the good work
From Corban
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