How To Survive An Outbreak Of Dinosaurs In Nelson
Nelson had maximum 259 people in the city
Back in my days we were called cavemen rather than humans and also there were different types of dinosaurs.
Nelson
So in your city it would be called Nelson but back then it was called Noslen so here is when the story starts.
On November the 16th we thought that why not have dinosaurs as our pets so the majority of men traveled down south at the very bottom to collect the eggs then they came back after a few weeks we waited and waited then when they finally hatched
For some reason we felt the ground shaking it wasn’t an earthquake but we could see i the distance there were quite a few mother dinosaurs then here come the outbreak of dinosaurs.
You will need,
1: Enough food to survive 7-9 months
2: Sleeping bags
3: Toiletries
4: Matches
5: Wood and paper
6: big back pack to fit everything in
7: things you need that you think will keep you safe
9: knifes
10: at least 15 big bottles of water
And now find somewhere really really really safe to stay maybe dig a really deep hole the cover in up then live under ground
Now you know how to survive an outbreak of dinosaurs on Nelson / Noslen
Make sure your not writing a procedure as this looks like one to me. you used a concluding statement that draws in the reader well and you used general statement the gives us information about the topic. well done
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I really enjoyed reading this. Next time try organising your story into paragraphs. By doing this it helps to make your story clearer to read. - Sophia
ReplyDeleteHi I really liked your story and how you use vocabulary associated with time. I also liked how you use nouns and verbs. Next time use subject specific technical term. From Amber N
ReplyDeleteI like how you said Nelson used to be called Nolson because I learnt something from your story great story
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