How to survive and out break of dinosaurs in Nelson.
Nelson is known for it’s exquisite dinosaurs.
They have been known for the ridiculous amount of damage they have done to our city. This must be done carefully proceed with caution.
There are lots of different types of dinosaurs including the pterodactyl the T-rex and much more. Because of this you have to use the right technique for them each.
This technique must be used for the pterodactyl. As the pterodactyl flies this can be tricky so you need to try and find a underground storage room to hide in.
The next skill is to try and use your fighting skills for the stegosaurus. this dinosaur is quite dangerous but can be knocked out if you punch it between the eyes and then run. This doesn't mean that you have to knock out every stegosaurus but means that you get rid of the ones in your way.
The third and final skill is for the T-rex. For this you need to a be on a high ledge so you can jump onto his back as he runs past. With all of these tips especially this one, you have to be EXTREMELY careful.
Hopefully I have informed you of what you need to do in this occasion and maybe you can save more lives than usual?!
Hi Scarlett,
ReplyDeleteI really like your story you had a good general statement that showed that you were talking about dinosaurs.
You had paragraphs in the right places.
You didn't use vocabulary associated with time.
Overall it was a good story!
~Amber T :)
I liked the way your story was well organised into tree main points. You have included a concluding statement. Make sure you take your time with your writing I know you can do so much better.
ReplyDeleteZoe
Hi Scarlett
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you talked about Nelson and also I liked the words you used like Extremely
From Esther your buddy