Friday, September 20, 2013

Walking home from school


As I walk home from school It begins to rain, ahh! Im going to get soaked I think to my self! About 10 minuites later I hear thunder, I look up and then I saw a bright light …. That’s not thunder? A big spaceship levitates over me. I start to run but get lifted off my feet by something. Just like in the movies I say!? Im in a room that’s pitch black then I fall into deep sleep after something pinches me. Im in my bed, at my house,  in my pajamas? I must have been dreaming, but then I saw a bright light outside oh no!.

By Asia

1 comment:

  1. Hi Asia
    A great response to the prompt this week. I always enjoy a story with a little twist at the end! You also used some interesting vocabulary, I particularly like the word 'levitate'
    Well done
    Miss T team 100wc

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