That moment when the family and I were fishing of the
boat on a bright summers day. We were getting lots of nibbles on our fishing
rods but no fish were caught. But that moment when my fishing rod jolted and
jolted. That’s when I knew I had caught something big. Trying and trying to
wheel the rod in but it was so strong I couldn’t. But then that moment I saw a
big bright yellow fish swim up to the boat and I leant out and got it. I still
don’t know what was on my fishing line but I have a fish now.
By Tom
Good job Tom! I was wondering what the fish would do. Very exciting when you finally caught it!
ReplyDeleteXander
Good story Tom. Very interesting:)
ReplyDeletewow that is really cool tom i reckon you and karl are tie
ReplyDeleteby tehya
room 5 bis
Nice story Tom
ReplyDeleteNikita
great story really interesting
ReplyDeleteHello Tom,
ReplyDeleteA great story!
I liked how you repeated words like jolted and trying to show what a struggle it was to catch that fish.
Keep posting your 100 word challenges!
Mrs Rowland (Team 100wc)