Suddenly I heard a crack as the latch on my front door sprung open. His hard footsteps thudded along my wooden floor. I gasped and ran into my room frantically searching for a place to hide. Then I found it, my wardrobe. In a panic I scrambled inside unfortunately knocking over my bed side lamp. A look of terror spread across my face as I had realized I just gave away where I was. I heard his heavy footsteps pick up speed heading in my detection. I panicked and couldn't think straight my door slowly started to open.
Monday, September 9, 2013
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WOW isabella your story was amazing! the words you used were awesome keep it up!
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