I’M DREAMING, IT’S WEIRD, I DREAM ALOT, EVERY NIGHT, BUT NEVER ABOUT SOMETHING LIKE THIS. I’M DREAMING ABOUT A BRIGHT LIGHT IN MY WARDROBE FLASHING CONTINUOUSLY AT ME, IT WONT STOP. THE FLASHING IS LIKE A RAINBOW, CHANGING FROM RED-ORANGE-YELLOW-GREEN-BLUE AND PURPLE.
I WAKE IN FRIGHT FORM THE FLASHING, AS I REACH TO TURN THE LIGHT ON I LOOK ACROSS THE ROOM. IT’S COMING FROM MY WARDROBE, THE RAINBOW FLASHING. I GET UP AND MOVE CLOSER, I REACH FOR THE HANDLE AND PULL IT OPEN, THE LIGHTS SWALLOW ME UP, THEN I’M GONE.
BY BRYLEE
hey i really liked your story and i thought you used very good language.
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hey brylee i really loved your story... it was AWSOME!!! and i really loved the language that you used
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Hi Brylee your story was OUT OF THIS WORLD! your adjectives and descriptive language was great
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Cool story but next time you should use a font that is easier to read from keegan
ReplyDeleteGood descriptive language and story but I didn't know what happened after the bright light got you!!!
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