I was sitting in my room doing my homework like any other day, but today wasn't like any other day, but of course I didn't know that until, BOOM, a big bright light flickered on and off in a second. For a start I thought I might have been seeing things, but then it went off again, I was starting to get scared. But I continued to do my homework. Then unexpectedly it went off again. Now I was really scared, so I ran out to mum and told her about the light, but no surprise she didn't believe me. Then, BOOM. But this time it wasn't the light...
By Nikita
heyy!!! I really loved the descriptive language you used:) And your story was AMAZING i thought it was sooo good
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used the words flickered and surprise.
ReplyDeleteI really like to know the ending of the story, sounds scary and amazing.
room 5 Karl
wow Nikita your story was awesome your descriptive language was great as well keep it up
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