Running past the trees, wind blowing my hair and soft grass underneath, I headed for the tunnel under the thunder path. Passing the pond, there's no time for ducks. A two leg sped by. I stopped, waiting for a gap between the monsters with shiny pelts. I bolt across to the other side. Home in sight, I speed to the open door, breathless, galloping down the hallway like a horse. On the bed I go. I hear a scream and hide, peeking out I saw a bright light shining in my eyes. I was welcomed with cuddles and waved my tail like a flag blowing in the wind. I'm home.
By Hannah
Friday, September 20, 2013
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hi Hannah:)I thought your story was awsome and the descriptive language that you used was really really really good.
ReplyDeleteGreat story hannah :P
emma room5
wow your descriptive language was so good I really enjoyed your story
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