The animal are happy.some animals has children.The man in the tractor is thinking.The sheep are
running. The pigs and dog is in the mud.
By Rahul
The dog on the farm ran right to the door, past all of the giant animals of horses, ducks and cows. The gate was in sight but he slipped, crashed into the watery mud and the farmer said you’re muddy again.
By Karl
A farmer drives his tractor to the garden so he could go and harvest crops for he had harvested corn, rice, wheat, tobacco and reed so he could make bread, risotto, paper, tobacco and corn but it was really hard work.
By Hadlee
All the big animals are having babys.
The farmer said look the baby cat don’st know were its mother is .
The baby cat looked and looked until she saw the cow family have you see my mother.
yes she is over at the hens so she went to the hen house have you seen my mother.
Yes she is there hi mum.
By Vinnie
Hi Karl, Rahul, Vinnie and Hadlee, You worked well on these but you need to focus on grammar.
ReplyDeleteThomas