As the train went into the tunnel the driver
blew the horn. Then all the little kids looked out the windows, all they can
see is the train’s light’s beaming throw the dark, dusty tunnel. All the kids were
listening to the sound of the hard metal wheels running along the train tracks.
When the train was near the end of the tunnel the driver blew the horn twice to
tell everyone. The light of day blinded everyone for a few seconds then they
all looked out the windows to a field of flowers, sheep and cows.
By Ashleigh
Ashleigh I could envision traveling on the train as it travels through the tunnel and comes out. You did a very nice job of writing great details that made your story fun to read. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Ashleigh,
ReplyDeleteThank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge, I enjoyed reading your writing. You've described the scene clearly, which helps the reader imagine what it is like.
Well done!
Mrs Stones