As I went to bed that night I dreamt of a train speeding past me, with
its big wheels and crankshaft trying to push its way through the dark night,
and the faint noise of chugga chugga choo choo, the cold suddenly wind hits me.
Then I follow it, I can’t resist chasing after it, as I leap up onto the train
tracks, my feet thumping every time I land on a cross tie, the gentle wind on
my face, I stop to catch my breath, my heart thumping. I look up as the train
entered the tunnel. And I wake up…
By Jess
Hi Jess
ReplyDeleteWOW!! What a great entry to the 100 word challenge. I really love your words and descriptions of the train. I especially like the phrases "trying to push its way through the dark night" and " the faint noise of the chugga chugga choo choo". You also use some excellent adjectives such as the "gentle wind. Your words paint a very vivid picture of a moment in a train's journey. Well done on such excellent writing and keep up the good work.
Ms O'Keeffe (Team 100wc)
hi jess. i loved the language you used.it was a great story:)
ReplyDeleteloved it
emma room 5
that was a good story Jess.
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