One beautiful day, I was taking a short walk on the beach. Feeling the warm
golden sand on my feet. Listening to the peaceful sounds of the waves crashing
onto the shore. Suddenly, I came across a
gigantic footprint! The big toe was roughly TWICE the size of me. And
there was another footprint about 5 miles away. I really wondered how someone
could do such a good job of drawing out such an enormous footprint. It must
have taken that person or those people ages!
But that was not the only question, did someone really draw it, or did
something really weird happen??
By Emma
Great story Emma!
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Good story Emma
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Good story Emma
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Thats a good story Emma
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WOW!!! Emma I was blown away by your story because it was so easy to read. I like how you described the toe size as twice the size of you so I could easily picture it in my mind.
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Lovely story Emma! Your descriptive language was AMAZING!!!! i could really picture the story coming alive in my mind! Well done!!
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Good story i like how you said about the sand.dylan
ReplyDeletegood story emma,nice descriping words.
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by cameron o'connell rm 5
I love your use of language
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lots of cool words in your story EMMA! i loved your story it sounded real amazing story
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i loved your story emma it was amazing nice use of language.
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