As the train entered the inky black tunnel there was a glow in the distance. Another train was accelerating along the track with a fire scorching the inside of the train. The driver of the unlit train slammed on the brakes and screeched to a halt as the driver of the train on fire hit the brakes as well. The scorching fire was getting out of control. Once both of the trains had stopped. The fire was out of hand so everyone on board lunged for their belongings and ran away from the burning train before it exploded.
Amber
Oh dear! It is so good to read that the passengers all ran to safety before the trains exploded.
ReplyDeleteYour description of the event is so brilliant that it comes across to e as if it is a real life experience.
Well done!
amber i really love your story its AMAZING!!! and you the language you used was fabulous.
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