Wednesday, August 21, 2013

Homesick


As the train entered the tunnel, I realized I had made a terrible mistake. I watched my warm breath fog up the icy windows. I closed my soft blue eyes trying to get the thought of my family and friends out of my mind, but that made it worse. A salty tear trickled down my red cheek as I started to sob.  I thought of all the fun my friends and I used to have, and the love my family gave me.  It put a warm fuzzy feeling in my stomach.  I made up my mind next stop I'm going home! 

By Isabella

2 comments:

  1. i really loved your story. Your descriptive language was AMAZING!!
    emma room 5

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  2. ISABELLA you naughty girl you made me cry !!!

    From Hannah in room 5

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