I walked along the undiscovered stretch of sand.
The microscopic grains fill even the smallest wrinkles in my feet. The
sensation of warmth was so exquisite that I had to have more. I began to
stride, going along with the wind, the flow over takes me, faster and faster.
Once I gained maximum speed I stopped and skidded, I no longer felt alone. I
looked around but I couldn’t find a single living creature, I started to walk,
gaining back my trust with the run. STOP!!!... I stumbled across a ginormous
foot print. I now knew I wasn’t alone.
By Jewel
what a GREAT story jewel
ReplyDeleteAnna Rm 14
what a amazing story Lilly room 5 b
ReplyDeleteAwesome. I loved the words that you used.
ReplyDeleteFrom Tom Tom
WOW the words you used were awesome and the story was cool!
ReplyDeleteportia
You've used some impressive words and phrases in your 100WC- I particularly liked the way you described the way the sand fills the wrinkles on your feet. Great work, keep it up!
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