I
was taking my dog for a stroll on a beautiful heat waved beach when, out of
nowhere I heard as if a hundred rocks
had hit the ground. Without thinking, I quickly ran onto the beach for a better view. Was it a monster? Or was it a giant? as
I walked across the rocky road stones, I caught a glimpse of its enormous foot print. I was freaking out for a
moment when something caught my
attention - a man wearing a beret was chuckling as he walked towards me. Did you
think that was real? That was just me!?
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By Asia
Very Good Language and good Writing
ReplyDeleteXander
your story had good words in it.vinnie
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ReplyDeleteLevi
I love how you used stroll.
ReplyDeleteTom
WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Man that descriptive writing just blew me away! I loved how you said 'the beautiful heat-waved beach'!!! Just AWESOME!!!
ReplyDeleteJoe
i liked the ending that was so cool
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