I was having a relaxing paddle in the kayak
when my sister snuck up behind me and pushed me into the water. Splash!
I fell into the freezing cold water.
I stood up, grabbing the kayak by the handle and dragged it into the
beach, then storm up the beach to the sand dune with the kayak in tow. I dropped the kayak next to Dad. I turned to look for my sister and could not
believe my eyes, there were giant footprints in the sand where I had walked up
the beach. I looked down in horror to
see I had huge feet!
By Hannah
Oh my goodness, Hannah. Whatever happened to you? You certainly left the reader with a mystery. Was it the cold water?
ReplyDeleteHi Betsye, I think my feet might have soaked up a lot of water. Thanks for posting the comment.
ReplyDeleteFrom Hannah
how are your feet now?lol
ReplyDeleteamazing story.
from jewel
Awesome. ! Bestsye is right. We are left with a mystery??!!??!!??!!??!!??!!?
ReplyDeletethat was a nice story Hannah
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