As the train entered the tunnel I could hear the sound of a long deep boom, I could tell it was a train. But its noise was distant It couldn’t be the train I was aboard. I peered out my window, further into to darkness to see a train heading our way. Its no use, the train can’t change tracks and its missed the turn. Next, all I remember is falling out of my seat as the trains franticly try to stop before the head on collision. I woke in a start, to see the two trains laying in pieces smoke rising and no one to help.
By Brylee
This was a really frightening piece of writing. You built up the suspense and fear so well and I was hoping there wouldn't be a disaster as I continued to read. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteI liked your story brylee and the expressive words like:Boom,franticly and collision.
ReplyDeleteJess (room 5)