Dun Dun Dun!
As the train entered the long, dark, scary
tunnel everyone thought that everything was going to be alright but they
thought wrong... Out of nowhere a massive hairy beast came out of the shadows
and stood in the middle of the train tracks. The train driver slammed on the
breaks, hoping but not hoping to hit the beast. Everyone was screaming thinking
that they were going to get eaten alive. Then when they thought it couldn't get
any worst, another massive hairy beast came out of the shadows, and stood next
to the other one. This beast was slightly shorter than the other one. What was
going to happen next?
By Nikita
Wow, that was a great story it got me excited and scared! Great job!
ReplyDeleteGREAT story Nikita liked it alot! Lilly room 5
ReplyDeleteGreat story, i liked the Dun Dun Dun.
ReplyDelete(but you could put commas with it)
Jess (room 5)
Dun Dun Dun! wow lots of good words used Nikita awesome story! I want to meet the beast please!
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