Once there lived a Girl called Chloe, one day she decided
to go for a walk up mount Arthur , on her way down she heard someone shouting
“Help, help, help!” Chloe automatically ran in the direction of the voice, she
also heard the guy saying other words, some of the words sounded like a foreign
language. Chloe finally reached the man, “Thank you so much, i didn’t think
anyone would come for me,” He said, he seemed like he was struggling to speak
English . he had fallen down a ditch, Chloe got out her rope and helped the man
out.
By Emily
What a good thing that Chloe took the time to help the man, even though she couldn't understand him very well. I enjoyed reading your story of adventure, nice work.
ReplyDeleteWhat a positive story and a good message for everyone to help those in need. Be careful with your use of capital letters you have some where they aren't needed and are missing some important ones.
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