"Still can't believe we're the first people to step foot on Mars!" My fellow astronaut Johnny whispered in disbelief as we made our way around the planet. To be honest, neither could I! But I had to focus on the mission at hand: look for any signs of life. "Look over here!" Johnny yelled, this was it he had found something! Gosh we were gonna get so famous.. I was shaken out of my thoughts as Johnny began to tug me towards him. He pointed to what seemed to be a huge bee?! "I don't think it's alive" "take pictures!"
By Sophie
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