Its 9:00pm and I'm going to bed before I go to bed I give mum a hug and kiss. After fall asleep I wake up, it’s dark and cold. I start to walk forward, I can hear someone talking in the distance. First I look around to see if there is anybody else around but there is not, its as empty as a ghost town. I hear a gunshot then screaming after it, I start to back off and hide around the curve to see who’s coming. Its an army, they must of emptied this place before I got here then someone shoots me with a rifle then I wake up horrified.
By Jack
Wednesday, May 28, 2014
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While your story is certainly an interesting one you may have forgotten to work this week's prompt into it.
ReplyDeleteYour story is full of action and suspense though, good work!
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ReplyDeleteThank you for entering this week's 100 Word Challenge.
I enjoyed reading your story.
Sometimes dreams can feel like real life. You did a good job in creating that illusion. Well done!
I look forward to reading more adventures from you.
Keep up the good work.
Mary @ Team 100 WC
Ireland