Oh my God, look what we have found. We are going to be famous , look at the size of this bumble bee. “ Its massive.” How did this happen make sure we have got all our protective gear on. It could be nuclear. It hasn’t been dead long we need a lot of photos. Also we have to get measurements. We don’t know what else is out here, there could be more this size or other creatures. We need to get a tent set up, until we are ready to move it. There has got to be more out here, this cant be the only one.
By Dana
I could feel the excitement of the ones who discovered the giant bee, and I like how you wrote about what their next steps will be. Keep up the good work writing on the 100WC.
ReplyDeleteDana, you start the story very well, I’m sure fame and maybe even fortune would cross the mind of anyone who found such a unique creature.
ReplyDeleteThe implication that this is only the beginning leaves the reader wanting more, well done.
Keep up the good work.
Tom Smith (Team 100WC)
Great story how hard would it be to right a 100 word story well you make it look easy
ReplyDeleteGreat story how hard was it to write 100 word story well you made it look easy!
ReplyDeletenice story guys ahhhhh big bee !!!!!!!!
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