I awake to
find two narrow pathways leading to nothing but darkness. I fell around for a
light and stumble across a torch “welcome” says a voice “are you ready to enter
my labyrinth” “WHO ARE YOU” I ask “I’m the creator of the labyrinth now are you
ready to start” I nod this must be a dream any way I turn an my torch and look
both ways one is filled with spider webs the other is plain and dull I’ll take
that one I run down until see spike sitting in the walls I get cut this I know
dream!
By Hamish
Well done on your entry Hamish. A very imaginative setting for the story. I got a little confused reading the middle section as I think you need more punctuation. The pace of the story gives the reader a good impression of how the character was feeling, well done.
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