I think it’s important that Lucy goes to school because not every one is perfect but should be treated the same. She needs to go to school so she can get a good job so she won’t have to live in poverty. Going to school with your friends makes you happy and every kid deserves to be happy. So I think that Lucy should go to school.
Yours Sincerely
Joe
This is some good writing your class has been doing keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHi Joe,
ReplyDeleteYou have given some very good reasons as to why Lucy should be able to go to school, just like any other person. You have shown yourself to be very thoughtful and fair-minded.
Have you heard of rhetorical questions? Maybe you could ask your teacher, and see if you could include them next time you are being persuasive.
Well done.
Mr Connor
Team 100wc
Derby, UK