Wednesday, May 7, 2014

The formula

The scientist arrived at the laboratory. He was very excited to be on front page news, because of his latest discovery. 5 minutes later the camera crew arrived.  The scientist explained his formula . He advised that they turn the flash off of their cameras . They went outside, the scientist gave the bee the formula. The bee started to grow massive,  it started to fly ultra turbo fast but this was not what he intended to do. The photographer snapped a picture of it but the flash was on so the bee fell . The scientist grabbed a stick to make sure it was dead and it was.


by Tia

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tia,
    I loved the quality of language and sentences you used here; you were able to create some great image sin my mind. It was a sad ending though!
    Keep up the good writing.

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