One day I was walking to school with my friends. While we walked across a old wooden bridge we saw a big black shadow and it was not ours, first we thought it was a plane but it was not the shape of one. Then with a huge thud some sort of beast the size of a small car came crashing down. We could not believe our eyes, my friend Bob thought it was a alien. It did not move, by then john another friend had called the cops. Then in a matter of minutes the armed police had arrived. Soon after the forensic scientists who were all kitted out in Wight overalls arrived and then the media and even the president was there, everyone wondered what this mysterious creature was.
By Samuel M
Hi Samuel,
ReplyDeleteI liked the approach that you took that the bee was massive rather than the people were tiny.
Make sure that you read through your writing afterwards, There was a capital letter missing on a name, and one where there shouldn't have been one.
Great piece of writing.
Well done for entering this weeks 100 Word Challenge!
Mrs Symonds (Team 100WC)
Cambridge, UK