Once there was a bee that had long wished to be an actor. His wish had never come true until one day there was an advert in the Bee News saying 'Come and audition for the part in the Bee Movie' Of course Bee went to the auditions. After, all he could do was wish and hope he got the part. Two days later in the Bee News was 'Congratulations Bee you got the part.' The crew filmed the movie, with their big cameras and huge movie set. After that movie Bee became famous as his wish had come true.
By Olivia
Really good use of punctuation. I like the way you varied the way you started your sentences. Keep up the good work.
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