The violent storm was screaming and thundering down on us. The wind was howling at houses like they were in pain trying to knock them down.
Everyone was trying to escape from the storm and flooding that confronted them with twisters and earthquakes. It was a national disaster!!!
I got trapped underneath a concrete wall that collapsed in the earthquake, there was no escape from it. The waters were rising, the lighting was striking people down like a finger squishing ants, and the twister was emerging out of the distance and was heading straight for me...
By Joe
Wow, your use of similes are amazing! You defiantly have a talent. I enjoyed reading every bit of your story. Try not to use more than one exclamation mark when you're writing stories. The cliff-hanger at the end of your story is very good indeed. Keep it up!
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That is an amazing story. Did you die or what?I loved your story. An amazing job. You have an amazing talent.
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