The rocket goes at the top
and then boom. The night was full of colours. It was so beautiful. Then another
came then two more come. It was like the stars are coming to earth.
By Rahul
Thursday, November 7, 2013
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Wow, the night was full of colours, this is a very powerful sentence Rahul. You have used lots of exciting ideas in your writing today, I really enjoyed reading your work. Next time you could add even more description for example what the fireworks actually looked like (size, shape, colour). Well done.
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