On a dark winters day the violent storm was crashing with thunder. houses falling streets braking and people left terrified. The violent storm was the worlds most dangerous storm and so so deadly. people were walking only seeing people getting swept away never to be seen ever.
There was no way of escaping no way! this storm could take out the hole human race my advice to you is run , run far far away from here. Unless you will die. Huge buildings falling on top of you crushing you but not straight death slow and painful thats the violent storm.
By Levi
great writing levi by t.w , k.c rm 15
ReplyDeletethat soundes scary Z.J rm15
ReplyDeleteOk I really REALLY don't like buildings crushing me I like sitting by a fire safe. Good punctuation and language great work zis story iz ze best
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