I
remember the feeling of blood trickling down my face, people screaming and
shouting everywhere dead bodies lying in front of me. I start moving I can hear
the crunching of the poppies at my feet. My body was starting to ache, the strength
was draining from my body I’m beginning to struggle with my gun in my hands. I
dropped to the ground flinging my gun
into the mist. I see my best friend lying next to me we look at each other then
all of a sudden there was this big explosion and no more sound and that’s all I
remember.
By Rose
Hi Rose - a really well constructed 100WC with some very descriptive sentences, not only describing the event but your feelings. Well done.
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Australia