Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Remembering what happened


I remember the feeling of blood trickling down my face, people screaming and shouting everywhere dead bodies lying in front of me. I start moving I can hear the crunching of the poppies at my feet. My body was starting to ache, the strength was draining from my body I’m beginning to struggle with my gun in my hands. I dropped  to the ground flinging my gun into the mist. I see my best friend lying next to me we look at each other then all of a sudden there was this big explosion and no more sound and that’s all I remember.

By Rose

1 comment:

  1. Hi Rose - a really well constructed 100WC with some very descriptive sentences, not only describing the event but your feelings. Well done.
    John C
    Australia

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